I thought this was an incredibly sweet story. I really enjoyed it, but I thought it was too short to truly fulfill it's promise. The conflict that Lee and Finn had was resolved in such a short time (a matter of a few sentences) that I had to read it over again just to make sure that I didn't miss something.
That's really my only complaint. I loved the characters, the story line, the hot sex...pretty much everything. I just didn't feel like Lee and Finn got all that they deserved.